Hannah,Another great draft - some very small changes to make:- change 'quizzes' to something else, maybe 'exclusives' or 'reviews'- make the cover lines on the right hand side bigger / more eye catching- make 'bath hand' image brighterGreat!EllieB
AGHHH! Just noticed that Psychosis is spelled wrong! - the 'H' after the 'P' needs to go!
Hannah,
ReplyDeleteAnother great draft - some very small changes to make:
- change 'quizzes' to something else, maybe 'exclusives' or 'reviews'
- make the cover lines on the right hand side bigger / more eye catching
- make 'bath hand' image brighter
Great!
EllieB
AGHHH! Just noticed that Psychosis is spelled wrong! - the 'H' after the 'P' needs to go!
ReplyDelete