Hannah,This is a fabulous first draft. I only have one issue, and that's the text; I like where it is and what it says but I don't like the font used for the tagline, title or endorsement (sorry!) Have a look at these again please.Great stuff,EllieB
Hannah,
ReplyDeleteThis is a fabulous first draft. I only have one issue, and that's the text; I like where it is and what it says but I don't like the font used for the tagline, title or endorsement (sorry!)
Have a look at these again please.
Great stuff,
EllieB